Crew and Talent

Emma Dini - Girl
Paul Carlton - Boy
Christina Thomson - Girl's mum

I have their cell phone numbers.

Director/camera - me

Treatment

The first song 'Can't keep on loving you' starts to play. The first scene is going to will be a close up of the girl's work with her hand writing some things to show she is hard working. The next will be a mid shot also showing the back of her still doing her work. Then a mid shot from the side of her but she has her hand on her face so you cant see who it is. The next scene will be a close up of the guitar and will have the guy playing it and I will pan up to the neck of the guitar where you will see him changing chords. Then there will be a mid shot from behind him still playing the guitar then a mid shot from the whole of his body except his face as I don't want anyone to know who he is yet. All of these shots will be about 6-8 seconds long. The next will be the guy opening the door from his house and walking outside as to show he is going to the park. Then will be the girl opening the door at her house. The next shot will be them two meeting at the park and they hug and walk away. The next will be a long shot of the two characters through the trees at the park holding hands, walking through. There will be a few different shots of this. The next shot is both of the characters sitting on a branch up a tree talking and laughing. It then switches to night time where the girl is inside standing across from her mum with her mum yelling at her. Then switches to an over the shoulder shot facing the girl and she is yelling at her mum. It then changes to the girl jumping out of a window the shot taken from outside watching her starting to climb oout her window then quickly switches to behind her where she jumps right out and runs out. It then switches to showing both of the characters on his motorbike and shows them driving away. The music will stop and you will only hear the sound of the motorbike in the final scene. Then the next song 'I'll love you so' comes on which brings on the credits.

Concept

My movie/beginning is going to be a romance about a girl and guy about 17/18 year olds. There is going to be a conflict of how hard their lives are and the beginning is going to show this. The rest of the movie would then be about solving these problems. Their conflict will be that their lives are different including eg. she is a hard working girl and her parents want her to do everything right in her life and work hard. Her parents are uptight and strict and don't let her do anything fun. He is a motorbike guy who doesnt have a mother and his father is no help. Her parents forbid her to see him so she sneaks out the window and jumps on his bike. Or her parents send her away etc etc.. I wish to show the troubles they are having yet how they are in love and want to be with each other forever. I want the audience to want to watch the rest of the movie as I want them to be intrigued of whats going to happen and how they will solve it.